"Editors deserve so much respect"

Avid - The choices I made

 

Over the course of three weeks we were tasked with editing the rushes from our studio shoot late last year with Avid, the editing software we have been taught through the Professional Toolkit unit. I chose this unit because I this year wanted to improve my technical skills, and become a better artist by being able to better edit and complete my own projects. Avid is probably the most complicated software I have ever been taught, and I would be lying if I didn´t say I found it very difficult. 

So starting off I wanted to make an edit that was different from the script and the planned story. Having been DoP for the studio shoot I was a big part of the pre production and production of this film, and thusly I´ve had a very close relationship to how the film developed and ended up. For this reason I wanted to challenge myself and create something other than just the normal narration of the film. 

Trailers

The last month I have been obsessed with the trailer for the upcoming movie "Logan". It´s a very simple trailer, but it really intrigues and catches the watcher, and by the end of it you almost can´t wait for the film to come out. 

As you can see it resembles the beats of many trailers, in that it has an old song, it crescendoes towards the end, revleases just enough to intrigue, and tells part of the story. I think trailers are their own unique type of media and they don´t get nearly enough credit compared to films. Of course films take way longer to create and edit, but when it comes to the financial success of a film, a trailer can either make it or break it. I want to create a trailer for Exhale, My Love, and try to create that sense of intrigue and interest that the trailer for Logan did. 

During the editing process I sadly didn´t take any screenshots, but I can explain everything I did and why I did it. To begin with I created bins for all the rushes (one bin for day 1 of the shoot, one bin for day 2, one for the audio, one for the foley etc) I then proceeded to go through all the clips, marking what the contain and if they were of interest for my edit. I wanted to build my trailer traditionally with it starting out with one or two scenes from the film to establish the conflict and set the story, and the give a glimpse of the rest in short clips meant to intrigue. 

I decided to use clips from scene 2 were Elliot first started coughing, and the following scene when they visit the doctors to find out whats wrong. By showing these two scenes in not too much detail but enough to give a rough idea of what´s going on I show the viewer the main plot of the story and what starts the conflict, without giving away the course of how the story evolves during the reminding scenes. 

Poster by Natalie Hodgins

The editing process itself was fairly straight forward, for the short clips I used bits of the film that I knew would be interesting, and would make people want to see the film itself. For an example, there is one suspenseful shot of Elliot sitting by the table eating and looking very angry and upset. Now, if you know the film you that he´s not actually angry, but rather confused and ill, and the scene it actually showing the straining relationship between him and Bella, but by using that clip out context I hoped to create some wonder about what the film actually about, and make the viewer question in what direction the film would go after the intial scenes. 

I ended the trailer with two longer clips around the title because I wanted to slow it down towards the end to let the viewer relax and process what they just saw. The final clip is of Elliot crying before you see the clock on the wall start to blink. I wanted to make that the final clip to make people wonder what the blinking meant, and why he was so upset about it. Is it an alarm? How is it connected to him? Does it have anything to do with his disease? Those are the types of questions I want people to have after they finish the trailer. At this point I was happy with the length of trailer and the clips I had used. I am aware that it´s shorter than what the brief wanted, but I felt that if added more clips it would feel drawn out, and crowded. 

After that I moved on to sound. First I muted all the audio tracks that belonged to the actual footage, and then added 4 more audio tracks. Mono left and right for music, and mono left and right for foley. For the foley I looked for key sounds that would give the clips some dimension and space. In the beginning of the trailer I added sounds of the keyboard, walking, cereal, and Elliot sighing. I mostly only wanted foley in this part of the trailer because I wanted the music to take over after the first scene and towards the crescendo, before dying out after the title and the final clip. In the final I again added the sounds of Elliot crying, to bring the trailer back to reality, and to the seriousness of the film. 

"Cello Suite No. 1" by Beethoven

As for the music for the trailer I wanted something that increased in intensity, but almost had a beautiful seriousness to it. I know it´s very in to use music from the 70s and 80s in trailers nowadays, but that wasn´t the feeling I wanted for the trailer. But when in doubt, classical music to the rescue! This piece by Beethoven not only fit the trailer perfectly, but it also fit my edit - as in that the piece became more instense around the part of the trailer where I started to increase the intensity. I then made it die off at the title, so that the impact of the final clip was more effective. 

In the final part of the edit I did colour grading. I didn´t do too much here because I didn´t want to change that much, but I did want to make the hospital scenes lighter, and the room scenes a bit darker. I did by adjusting the hue and gamma in the colour correction tool, to fit the scenes, but also depending on which character was in the shot. Our actress for Bella has a fairer complexion than our actor for Jacob, so in scenes with her I would get rid of things like redness. 

All in all I´m very happy with my edit. I think that as a trailer it does what it´s supposed to do - it creates intrigue, and it prepares you for the film without giving too much away. 

TJ

Where my job starts taking off

Before our first meeting with a complete script I prepared by having a through look at the script, and making some basic ideas for shots I wanted to have in the film. Taking inspiration from Wes Anderson, and based on the fact that our set would be a square with three walls, a centered table, window to the left, and digital screen to the right, I found it fitting to use Andersons centered and symmetrical style. I tried my best to make this visual apparent through the shots I designed. 

As our storyboard artist sadly dropped out just before pre-production started I had to draw the storyboard myself. As I am very bad at drawing, we decided that I would draw what I visualised as clearly as possible, and then hand it over to Arturs who would make them look more presentable. Natalie and myself bounced ideas off each other for what we wanted the look to be during the storyboarding of the first scene, so that I could get a better understanding of what she wanted. 

This specific storyboard was drawn by Natalie, but it gives a rough idea of what the initial storyboards looked like.

Over the next two weeks I had a lot of contact with Natalie while I was drawing up the storyboard, and I finished it the week after study week. A lot of the scenes are short, and happen quite quickly, which is why I decided to make the last scene, scene 7, longer and slowed down. For this scene I took a lot of inspiration from Tod Campbell in which I wanted to show the distance between the characters, but also their love, and how hopeless the situation feels. 

I therefore decided that I wanted the lighting to be really dark and moody, a lot darker compared to a night scene slightly earlier in the film. The shots are drawn out, showing the characters on their own, and borrowing from Campbell, the characters are pushed to the sides in the frames, to better highlight the hopelessness felt. 

This is especially shown in the second shot of this page, as they are are sat on the floor against the wall. They are sat in the left bottom corner while the dark and badly illuminated wall looms over them. The only other thing in frame is the digital screen that shows how many verbal credits they have left. This to further show how this is controlling their lives to the point where it will end them and their relationship. 

I also sat down with Preston (Assistant Director) to write the shot list, but I had to redo a lot of it because we had to do cutbacks in the storyboard + the camera operator wanted a more detailed shot list when it came to camera movement. I agreed with him, and completed the final version of the shot list. 

Thoughts: 

Although a time consuming process I have enjoyed crating this storyboard. Never before have I felt such a creative freedom over such an important project. It seemed almost surreal to me that so many people were dependent and trusted my decisions and my creativity. I think Natalie noticed this as she multiple times had to say "that she trusted my decision on this as DoP". That really helped me realised the magnitude of my work, and encouraged me to create something memorable. 

-TJ

The Shoot - the stress, the problems, the victories

Before me stand the two most important days of this entire project - the shoot. I have a lot of expectations for these days, as well as some worries, and a whole lot of responsibility.

So what do I expect, what do l look forward to, and where do I think we'll have trouble?

I expect it to be stressful, at least the first day. We're all new to this, we've never had this much independence when it comes to a film, but as the same time we've never had the same amount of responsibility. We all know that the entire group is expecting us to do our part. So yeah, that is a lot of pressure, but I'm personally excited to see how I work under this kind of pressure. Will I be able to keep my head cool, and make important decisions when needed? Will my storyboard look as good in real life as it did in my head? I'll finally learn the answer to all those questions and doubts! 

So Monday comes around, and we're all on set. The first scene goes swimmingly, and the actors are doing amazing jobs. But then we encounter our first problem - the dolly won't fit on set and we can't make room for it because of the continuity of the shot. Because of this the camera scrambles a bit as it tries to build the shoulder rig and fin a solution to the problem, but this costs us a lot of time. For the rest of the first day we tried our best to make that time back, but because of all the dolly shots we have to change, and a generally bad work flow among the crew, we have to go overtime. We do manage to finish all the scenes we wanted to finish on the first day, but in the industry you could get fired if the production goes overtime, so after talking to Preston, I took note of how the work flow could be improved for the second day of the shoot. 

This is one of many many impromptu meetings Preston and I had during our two day shoot.
This seems to be a calmer one, with less panicked stress

That being said, I think the camera department managed to compensate for the lack of our missing equipment very well. I think any department would have a bit of trouble keeping time with that kind of obstacle, and although the communication between Preston, Natalie, and myself could have been better, I feel like the camera department was able to get the shots we needed efficiently so that we could finish everything for the day. Umor also did really well, and we worked well together to make the light changes as swiftly as possible. 

The second day went very well I think. The work flow was better, and the the whole crew worked well together. I was able to more thoroughly instruct Arturs in how I wanted the frame and the shot to move, and also I communicated better with Natalie so that we more easily and faster could get to an agreement on how we wanted the shot to look. 

I definitely felt like Arturs and I worked better on the second day,
and that our work flow was really good.

We did have some differences were we both had a vision for a shot, and thought it was the best fit, but ultimately we had to do whatever we had time for. I did notice during the shoot that I missed a lot of the shot that had to be cut, as I feel like they gave the film that little extra, but I understand that when we're limited to 3-5 minutes, we only have room for the highly necessary. We did have a slight difference of vision when it came to the centered shots, which as I described earlier was a conscious stylistic choice on my part as I feel like it would give the film a constant that tells a story of its own. In my mind if you took out all the establishing centered shots in the film, and cut them into a montage of stills, they would still tell the story. But, during the shoot I discussed it with Natalie, and she made it clear that it didn't fit her vision of the film. That was of course okay, she is the director, and I adjusted the shots so that they still made sense -like putting them at slight angles and a couple of over the shoulder shots. I think they still work well with the film, and that her vision makes a beautiful film. 

I've enjoyed working with Natalie as director a great deal, and I think she has a great eye for this.
I also feel like our styles complimented each other very well.

Another challenge we faced on the second day of shooting is that we had to polish the lighting plan for the morning scene. We decided to do a drastic change by adding a door on the fourth wall that would creative a slit of golden morning light on the back wall. I feel like it was the right creative decision to make, as it add some difference to the scene, and makes it more apparent that its a different part of the day. We created it by putting two large pieces of poly on c-stands and holding them up against a studio light with orange and nd gels on it. I think the final product looks amazing! 

We finished on time, and I think we were all pleased with the result!

-TJ

Writing down the equipment is easy, knowing everything you need is not

The Equipment List - Conscious Decisions 

The equipment I was responsible for getting out

As head of the camera and light department it was my responsibility that Mary (Producer) knew exactly what camera and light equipment she had to book out for the shoot. So if we needed anything extra we would have to take our chances that they still had what we needed when we needed it. So by giving Mary this list I was able to make sure that we would have all the equipment we needed. It was simple enough, as we were given a list from Anne over all the equipment she felt like we needed, all I had to do was add to the list with whatever specialised equipment I felt like would add to the film - much like I wrote in my research post that Tod Campbell chose a more rounded lens because the actors had big eyes. 

So what I added was three lenses. After talking to Arturs (Camera Operator) we decided that it would benefit us if we had a macro and a micro lens for certain scene. Particularly the hospital scene as we have to film that on the back of the set were there's limited space - our kit lens might be too big. For that we got the Nikon 105mm f/2.8 lens, as we knew that it comes with good image stabilisation, which is critical at close ranges. We also got a Nikon 17-35mm f/2.8 for the wide angle establishing shots, as well as a Nikon 50mm f/1.8 to have a lens with a set focal length as well. During the shoot we ultimately didn't use any of these lenses, but I still stand by the decision to hire them just in case a shot could have been improved by it. 

-TJ

Lighting - a lot of new ground to cover

As head of the camera department and the visual look of the film it was very important that I got lighting right. Lighting can make or break a film, and can be the difference between a shoddy "student film" and a professional film. So once the storyboard was finished Umor (Gaffer) and I spent a lot of time on set imagining how we wanted to light the film. This posed a lot of challenges as it was the first time either of us had properly done lighting (outside of lighting workshops and minor personal projects.) And as this is our biggest film to date we wanted to do do it justice. 

We had to create five different moods; morning, day, early night and dark night; for scene six, as we wanted scene seven to be even darker, and ultimately we had to create the hospital lighting. At first we tried reasoning ourselves to a solution with the knowledge we both had of studio lighting, but we didn't really get anywhere until we asked Anne for help. She told us that it was important that we have enough light on our actors faces, as to give the shots a nice look. We took this piece of advice and created a very basic lighting plan. 

It had two studio light which we would use for modeling the actors faces, and one light shining through the window to act as daylight, moonlight/street lamp. We later realised that this would not be enough as there were a number of things we had not taken into consideration. Firstly we had a talk with Preston and Arturs, they had some ideas and concerns which we had to address. Mainly that the light shining through the window would not be enough to light up the room at all point during the shoot, as it would have to move, because the sun also moves in real life. We did some changes, but decided that we were still not done. We then had a talk with Chris, who is the studio supervisor, and he had some ideas that ended up using - primarily a large piece of poly roughly at the fourth wall, that would act as a fill for the entire scene. This gave us a set that was dimly illuminated, and easier to work with. After this we could start working out what our key light was (usually the one behind the window) and what gels we could use to create the different times of the day. 

We ended up using this design: 

The daytime scene

So we could not aim two 2ks at the poly to create a fill (we could alternate this for the other scenes as to create different effects, and add gels for the night and morning.) We had the 5k behind the window shining daylight through the blinds that we put over the window. This created a pattern on the wall that further created the illusion of daylight. And lastly we had the house lamp and the desk lamp on set to create an even more realistic feel. 

On the second day of shooting we made slight changes to the morning lighting plan as we felt it need to be a little bit different from the rest. We had used the light through the blinds on the day and night scenes, and it wouldn't make sense for the sun to be shining through the same window during the morning too. Therefore we created a door on the fourth wall that would let a slit of golden light into the room. This worked really well. 

Thoughts:

All in all I am really happy with the way we met the challenges and solved them. Umor was a great Gaffer to have, and him and Ollie (who helped us out) were an amazing help during the shoot. We definitely learned a lot, at least I did. I realise now how important it is that the DoP knows his lighting and how he wants the film to be lit, because if not you end up with a lot of back and forth without anyone actually knowing where this is headed. I don't think I did a bad job with the lighting, but it had to be a collaborative effort with multiple people on the crew because I was working it out. Towards the end of pre production, the set building, and the shoot, I felt like I had better control, and was able to properly instruct how I wanted the lighting to look. 

-TJ

Our brief and first couple of meetings - what worked , what didn't

Thus begins pre-production. We are to make a 3-5 minute short film, using only 5 words of dialouge, and a photograph for inspiration. The photograph will be our inspiration for the film and should spark some sort of narrative. These are the photgraphs we were given:

Blind Twins (1980) by Jane Evelyn Atwood, King and Queen (1970) by Diane Arbus, Untitled 1997 by Hannah Starkey, and Untitled 1962 by Ralph Eugene Meatyard. 

Sadly I was ill in bed on the day of the brief, but I kept in contact with my group over text, where we discussed possible ideas and narratives to explore. As a group we decided that we preferred "King and Queen", and "Untitled 1997", and these were the images we wanted to use as inspiration. 

"King and Queen" by Diane Arbus

"Untitled 1997" by Hannah Starkey

As I was ill the day of the brief, I sadly lost out on a lot of the discussion around the different ideas and so on, but when the idea did reach me, the group had arrived at a dystopian narrative where food and essentials are limited and scarce. I found this to be a really interesting concept, that can birth numerous narratives, and I was looking forward to our first meeting the day after. 

During this meeting we didn't get very far. A lot of people had a lot of ideas, and a lot of people felt very strongly that their idea was superior, this lead to a lot of discussion without anything actually being decided. We did agree that we liked the slightly dystopian setting with scarce essentials, but we had a lot of different ideas about how to show this. We discussed everything from mannequins, tadpole soup, shots of water, and insanity, but ultimately we had to scrap most of it because of our limited budget. We finished our meeting with a lot of half baked ideas and no set sketches, as our set designer was ill. This in turn made it very difficult for me to start designing visuals, as I had no idea what our restrictions and limitations were. In the end Preston (Assistant Director) and Natalie (Director) sat down and created a narrative that was practical and creative. Natalie wrote a rough draft of the script which she shared with the group, and after minor changes we decided to make this our film. 

A world were words are a money, and when you run out of words you die. One of our main characters would have an illness that would force them to almost run out of credits (as we could only use 5 words), and the film being centered around their relationship and their final days together. 

After this we could finally start designing the set, and working on our storyboard. I had some creative input into the creation of the set, and where our light sources would be, but other than that I focused on creating the feel for the film in cooperation with Natalie and Preston. 

-TJ

Director of Photography, Cinematographer - doesn't matter what it's called, it's still my first time doing it

At the beginning of this year we researched film crew roles (see my post on Continuity supervision), and one role that really struck a cord with me was the role of DoP - the shot creator and head of the camera department. I would be responsible for making technical and artistic decisions for the image, or "look", of the film. This is of course a massive responsibility, and I want to tackle it with all my attention and innovation - but, it is also my first time doing it, so I assume I will make mistakes. To avoid making a horrific number of mistakes, I am doing this research to best prepare me for what is to come. 

My first step was to look at films and series that I know have an aesthetic look, as to see if this is the work of any cinematographers I can take inspiration from. Like most film students I really like Wes Andersons films, so that was my first stop. 

"Moonrise Kingdom" 2012

I quickly realised that Robert Yeoman has been the cinematographer for all of Wes Andersons films, probably because they have similar creative visions. and work well together. I know that its not uncommon to keep working with people you know you work well with in film, so this makes sense. Their shared style is very symmetrical, and linear, as you can see in the picture above, and below. As well as most shots being centered, most of the camera movement is very simple. They use fast pans that usually go in straight lines, which adds a very clear structure and style to the films. I quite like this style as it tells you what you need to know in every frame, and then quickly moves on to the next frame without too much "filler." I think I want to use the centered style when I design my shots as I quite like the aesthetic of it, and I also feel like it tells the story without having to add unnecessary filler shots.  

Another example of Anderson and Yeomans style.
Pictured from left to right: "Moonrise Kingdom", "Fantastic Mr. Fox", and "The Royal Tenenbaums"

Furthermore I looked into a recent favourite of mine, "Mr. Robot". The look and feel of this tv series is quite unique and unconventional, and I that is something I figured was worth looking into. Created in 2015 by Sam Esmail, this series has a dark, moody, and gritty feel to it, not afraid to use a lot of shadows, and unusual colour in their shots. Tod Campbell is the DoP for the series. (He was also the DoP for two of the episodes for the massive hit series Stranger Things.) Not a lot of information is available about Campbell, but what I could find was quite interesting. 

"Mr. Robot" 2015

In an interview for vulture.com, Campbell explains the different choices he made in his visual approach and why he did what he did. He says that a lot of the characters have quite big, bulbous eyes, and that because of this he used a Cooke S5s lens, because it is a bit rounder than most lenses, and therefore frames the face, makes lines softer, which thus brings more focus to oblong shapes - like eyes. I need to think about decisions like this for our shoot - which lenses to use to better compliment the visuals of the shot. 

Furthermore Campbell explains that he had long talks with creator Sam Esmail about the feel of the film, and what he wanted. As you can see it the still above, the shot is framed unusually. The characters are pushed down in the left corner, almost out of frame. This is very different to, for an example, Wes Andersons style that we discussed earlier in this post. But Campbell explains this visual choice by explaining that because the series relies heavily on narration and multiple characters isolation he wanted to show that through his look. Thus he created a frame where you can clearly see the huge amount of "nothingness" that weighs on the characters. I think this is a very interesting approach, and although its not something everyone would immediately think of, it makes sense, and gives the series a feel that puts it ahead of its competition. 

Through my research I have learned a lot of things that I did not previously know or even think about, and I think this will help me when I start working on the feel of our film. 

What do I expect from this unit: 

I realise that being the Director of Photography is going to be one of the biggest challenges I have ever taken on, and that it will consume a lot of my time to get right, but at the same time I feel invigorated after my research. I feel ready to start the project and to create something that I can be proud to put my name on. I understand the importance of working as a team, and after my research I understand it even better. If Sam Esmail and Tod Campbell didn't talk properly then maybe Campbell wouldn't have thought of that specific way to frame his shots. But its not just important that the Director and DoP talk often and throughly, but also that I am clear about the shots that I have designed. I am not a very confrontational person, and usually prefer to compromise rather than start conflict, or even debate. I think that is something I need to work on for this unit, so that I will be able to politely, but firmly ask my Camera Assistant to set up the tripod at a certain place, and also properly explain to my Operator how I want it framed, without backing off completely if someone has a different vision. I think its a good thing to talk about the visuals with your team, and let them have input, but ultimately, if it goes against my preferred visual, I'll have to clear about what I want. Its going to be a challenge, but I am ready to face it. 

- TJ 

"omg in this shot he takes his clock off, but in a shot a minute later the clock is back on his wrist??"

Essentially the continuity supervisor, also known as the script supervisor, is the person on set who makes sure that each shot follows the same time line. If something changes in a scene, and that scene needs to be reshot or shot from a different angle, the continuity supervisor makes sure that anything that was changed during the shoot has been reset.

The continuity supervisor is in a way every departments back up, and has to make sure that at the end of the day the film can be cut together, and that it makes sense. He has to work closely with the director and the DOP, because it's important that these three roles agree on what the scene should look like.

Actually the continuity supervisor has to work very closely with every department, as its important that everyone is on the same page, so that the film is coherent. He'll also have a look at the script before shoots starts and make comments to all the different departments. These comments are used to by the departments to create the most advantageous and efficient shoot order.

TJ